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The Robin

At the foot of the cross a bird came to sing For his friend some comfort for to bring A tiny droplet fell and splashed his chest soft words from tired lips Fly high fly free sing to the child as you sang to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/28/2010 9:19:00 PM
OH, how lovely a thought of how he became robin redbreast, Daniel. such creativity! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/24/2010 1:53:00 PM
I finished the easy cheesy poem...let me know if it is too stupid??
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:05:00 AM
So nice to see u on my comments page again Daniel.. hope it will be a daily occurrence now that u are posting again.. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:01:00 AM
This is an inspiring "shape" poem, Daniel. Please send that robin my way. I would love to hear it sing. Beautiful writing, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/23/2010 1:25:00 PM
enjoyed!
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Date: 8/23/2010 1:07:00 PM
AWESOME and so good to see u back Daniel..my friend.. have missed your intense poetry ... this one is a perfect concrete piece with a phenomenal message so beautifully stated.. enjoyed my friend.. please keep in touch.. luv.. ciao...
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Date: 8/23/2010 12:31:00 PM
Hello Daniel: What a wonderful poem of faith. Fantastic!!! Have a very good day. Yours truly: Sheol
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