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The Road Taken

Reminders of looking back the other way Impossible to recall 'just' the way we were Took the road few travel, wiser for it today And yesterday, took a road to travel away From here, the angels tears and the silver fir, Now the Pacific rim sat motionless, dull and silent No longer quaking, but aware our departure We found beauty there, but never relent To find it here, as the molten magma is sent To engulf in flames those who didn't capture Magnificence of nature quite as concisely as he, But trust me, went down that other road too We find it full of bears, demons, the crocodile be A terrifying thing, tearing and shredding what we Dream of at night, under the stars, down to two The two of us at last out here in the Shires So much more mellow of a meadow, and a fir Or two to rest under still, contemplate desires That still beat in our hearts, perhaps us liars Find peace, in the end, just me and her. We took the road... -Frost Inspired ;)

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Date: 7/27/2011 1:25:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyable read Tim, a fine journey I have to say. Many thanks for your kind words :)
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Date: 7/24/2011 7:00:00 PM
Great visions for the eye to devour in this wonderful verse. Especially love the last line!
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Date: 7/24/2011 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth, that last line was a last minute addition, wasn't going to throw it in! :)
Date: 7/24/2011 5:56:00 PM
Profound write on the journey through life, Tim
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Date: 7/24/2011 7:57:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta! Always a pleasure to hear you enjoyed one of my poems.
Date: 7/23/2011 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Tim. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and hoping you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Tim B
Date: 7/24/2011 1:06:00 PM
Carol, thanks as always, I am always on the look and listen for motivation and inspiration.
Date: 7/22/2011 9:41:00 AM
Tim, this poem is awesome! Not only do you create beautiful images so eloquently, but the journey through life that you describe is compelling. Love the line about the molten magma engulfing in flames those who failed to see the beauty in this journey. What a fabulous poem. Frost would be pleased, but I think you outwrote him here! Love, Carolyn
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Tim B
Date: 7/24/2011 1:07:00 PM
You are too kind! Thank you very much though, it means a lot to hear someone think I out-wrote a master, thanks Carolyn! :)

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