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The River We Call the Ness

This river I talk of just has to be seen In it's meandering turns it's simply a dream No matter the season it's flow simply delights Daffodil lined banks of green in typical springtime sight Whether it be azure blue or grey, it's mirror of colours ooze Enticing your eyes to witness as eventually your mind will choose As you see the salmon leaping and the hungry seals in seek The scenery that surrounds this river, will draw your visit, meet Like many stretches of water, if it's in your heart you'll admire If you have witnessed as much as I, you will never ever tire To know where we call this river, in time your answer will be For to adventure to it's meanderings, you'll be standing beside me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/15/2011 8:04:00 AM
Oh I want to go there. Sounds lovely. Nice job my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:42:00 PM
So picturesque dear poet ! A beautiful vission James which has me longing for the sites you from time to time enlighten us all with ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:30:00 AM
Just lovely, peaceful and what I need this morning. Luv Elizabeth
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:45:00 AM
Wishing I could see and feel for myself, you have described the river beautifully...luv shannon
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:24:00 PM
Took me back to teens when I used to read a lot of stuff about Loch'Ness River and those big monsters....nicely written!
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:56:00 AM
Sounds lovely! I would love to see it sometime! If I had the money, I'd travel to the UK. I've only been to London, but I really want to go to Ireland and Scotland!
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Date: 6/30/2011 7:32:00 PM
a charming treat and delight James to learn of the Ness ..does the monster really live there still? good luck in the contest with this amazing and authentic rare beauty luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:48:00 PM
Oh how I would love to be standing there, and witness what you have described! Lovely! (I can dream of it however!:)
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:57:00 PM
Creative and engrossing expressions on river, James
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