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The River of Life Flows On

The River of Life flows on (poem) We all remember our ups and downs, and our smiles to our frowns. It is beautiful like a crown, a crown upon a woman, wearing a gown, but will always be let down. Life flows like a river, from being heated to getting a shiver, and it is majestic as a wiver. The birds continue to fly, high up in the sky, and the children wonder why, why the children cannot fly. A country of peace, and all in ease, while some have to lease. Lease their home, always seemed gloam, as they always cover themselves with chrome. Life flows like a river, from the glamorous sky to the repugnant ground, and it can be worse with a frown. It can be like a play, being played in the broadway, as these actors pray. Pray to saints day, but they always see their lord as a portrait, while their children horseplay in their school hallway. Life flows like a river, while all may not be a giver, but they can give up their liver. And so it flows, the river goes, and life continues to glow. Fin

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Date: 5/29/2016 12:28:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brett. :)
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:31:00 PM
welcome to the Soup, Brett. enjoyed this read.
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:40:00 PM
Brett, you have a certain way about your poetry ..thanks for sharing. Linda
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:40:00 PM
Brett,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Brett Estes
Date: 6/7/2016 6:24:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/26/2016 6:13:00 PM
Brett,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* NR--- SKAT
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Brett Estes
Date: 6/7/2016 6:24:00 PM
I look on the screen It said she had just hugged me I blush in cute manner.

Book: Shattered Sighs