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The River

Like the flow of blood through the vein and Sensual feel of cold drink through the throat, I feel refresh and happy sinking dip into it, The patting hands of the sun adds to this sensation, and the dancing aquatic creatures is a sight to behold, The soothing effect of its cold touch on my skin makes me shiver,as I grab a rocky stone for support. I raise my head to be free from its tentacles,. grasping for air. Olusegun Arowolo. date: 9-8-2015 Contest:Poems that did not place and more! sponsored by Nette Onclaud. ***River

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:46:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:30:00 PM
Olusegun, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:21:00 AM
well essayed , olu...thank you for joining my contest and sweet congrats!
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:00:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write olusegun!
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