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The River

You wind along the shoreline, jutting in and out, Just like a shiny snake, you move with stealth and grace. You slither past the fields and meadows there about, So swiftly rippling under bowing trees you race, Jutting in and out endlessly with stealth and grace. And further up you flow past villages on hills With homes atop their rolling lawns and regal view… Your silver water shining under sun that thrills The eyes of those who stand beneath the sky of blue; With sun that thrills, your beauty glows in regal view. Where are you heading, river, as you drift along? Where did you start your journey many years ago? If only we could understand your rippling song… What secrets lie beneath your never-ending flow As you drift along entrapped in never-ending flow? © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~1st Place~ Contest: Manassian Quintain Sponsor: Craig Cornish Judged: 02/17/2015

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Date: 2/18/2015 10:36:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:53:00 PM
Love it Sandra...this is written wonderfully well...big congrats!
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2015 3:51:00 PM
Hi Richard, thank you so much for stopping by with your congrats! I really appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 2/18/2015 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Beautiful. Janet
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2015 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, Janet. So nice of you to stop by! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/17/2015 4:52:00 PM
wow such a glorious flow to the poem Sandra - you nailed it - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. This was such an interesting form to work on. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 8:14:00 PM
This was the most difficult contest, but you sailed along and it seemed effortless! Lovely is this, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much for your positive comment, Carrie. It was fun to work on. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 2:28:00 PM
I believe this is the best Manassian I have yet seen. Wonderful job with the form, and the poem is a beauty on its own.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:33:00 AM
Isaiah, thank you so much for your very encouraging comment. I really appreciate you stopping by to read it and letting me know that you enjoyed it. Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 12:57:00 PM
I can feel the river's flow as it rolls along through time. Beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, M.L., for your positive comment. Sandra
Date: 1/20/2015 10:29:00 AM
I really like this..this is such a difficult form..you did a great job. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hi Barbara, so nice of you to stop by with your nice comment. Thanks! Sandra

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