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The Risks of Love

THE RISKS OF LOVE It was a hostile land in those days, singing Of our dream of a house, clinging To something we could believe in, Rooted in the soft rocks so that even The breath of the earth itself was muffled. Precarious, tenacious, cliff-edged - Dwelling there for three score years of nights And never a pause taking from its delights; Never choosing to deny the thrill of waking, Or surrendering our siren-held souls, or shaking Off our thraldom. 'Twas the perfect foil To the ever-present harshness and soil Of the reality on solid ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 2:47:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:31:00 PM
SIDNEY, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sidney! Great work!
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Date: 8/8/2015 7:41:00 PM
Let me be the first to comment on your poem. I appreciate the fact that I might have to read it more than once in extracting all the meaning. I feel that it was very nicely done... George LeBlanc
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