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The Right Key

The other day You did pull those curtains back ever so gently as you exposed me to the light With your opening of windows I could breathe again The air rushing in I looked at you and a tear jumped from the corner of my eye I knew your love was never a lie For you’re the only one that has found the right key That key engages the happy me

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  1. Date: 7/26/2011 11:00:00 PM
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  1. Date: 7/23/2011 3:17:00 PM
    Tear of corner eye does not tell lie. Thanks for sharing O'neal. bl

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 2:26:00 PM
    lovely piece Jay and for sure the right key opens all doors of emotion to great lasting luv.. super entertaining write luv..

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 9:44:00 AM
    Lovely write, i too am very happy in love. PS thank you for kind encouraging comment and top marking on my poem , " Nothing ever lasts forever " blessings Paul