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The Rhythm

Water droplets slips through leaf follows the rhythm, of my heartbeats.

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 11:37:00 PM

ASUTOSH:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Lee Carter

Date: 7/22/2015 12:45:00 PM

Love this haiku ... Great job ! ~ lee

Daver Austin

Date: 7/21/2015 3:46:00 PM

Delightful haiku. Congrats on the selection. daver

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/20/2015 9:55:00 PM

Short but good! Nicely done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2015 1:37:00 AM

Asutosh, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ashutosh Gupta
Date: 7/10/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot for such a warm welcome. I am eagerly looking forward to your poetry as well. Cheers :)

Skat A

Date: 7/8/2015 1:24:00 PM

Ashutosh, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT