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The Return of the Dragon Lord

The Return of the Dragon Lord
Heart twisting in winter wind, tripping through a water-colored dreamscape, as if bewitched, she listlessly paces outside his dismal, dark cave. Peering at the distant gray hilly horizon, she anticipates her Dragon Lord’s return. With his golden reptilian eyes flashing, and his mighty wings stretching across the sky, she knows he's making his way back home to her. Chilled to the bone, without her beloved to cloak her in his masterful embrace, she yearns to feel the magical warmth of his breath lingering on her lips, permeating her body, awakening her senses.
Consumed by an intense inner hunger, she has totally lost her mind; and must be completely his once more, to quench these tormenting flames of desire that threaten to combust from deep within her heart, body, and soul. A prisoner of his magnetic charms, she's captivated by his familiar musky scent, forever a slave to his alien mystique. Oh, to be one with him again, to let his blood run through her veins, transforming her. Heart over-flowing with love, she'll wander along these cold shores waiting for that joyous day… when her Dragon Lord returns.
10-22-2015 Contest: Dragons Sponsor: Silent One Placement: 4th

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Date: 2/12/2016 5:44:00 PM
Hi Pandita. this is a passionate fantasy that you lay before us. This is an excellent write. I am always drawn to anything with dragon in the title for i Love the thought of dragons. I do Love the concept of this write, the words sing in passion's waters. The words flow so easily into the heart stirring the emotions within. Your imagery is fascinating. The Dragon Lord does open the imagination to new levels. An excellent write Pandita. A seven and into my faves.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/22/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend for rating this piece so highly placing it into your faves, and leaving me your wonderful compliments! Like you I'm fascinated by dragons and I just let my imagination fly wildly in this write. Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Date: 11/16/2015 8:08:00 PM
An interesting rendition of the lady in waiting. Waiting for her dragon lord- the man of fire, the Prometheus, and monotone slayer to bring her liquid passion to her dull, dull stone. I like it, but I think you could dive a little deeper, as if in memory of riding the dragon (take such thoughts as you please), in your imagery. But the idea is very interesting.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2015 2:06:00 PM
Hi H.E., I appreciate the time you took to review my work, your thoughts, and comments. Thank you very much! Pandita
Date: 11/14/2015 5:53:00 PM
This piece is like a time machine that has the power of transporting me to another place and time! I love it, Pandita. Excellent job and congratulations on your win! Kika
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Date: 11/14/2015 6:02:00 PM
Hi Kika, I always appreciate your kind compliments! Thank you, my friend! Pandita
Date: 11/11/2015 7:56:00 PM
wow, I can see how this won a contest. GREAT poem, Pandita. Quite the fantasy. Congratulations.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/12/2015 11:48:00 AM
Hi Andie, thank you, my friend, for all your support and kind compliments which always mean the world to me! Pandita
Date: 10/28/2015 12:41:00 AM
Excellent. Very vivid imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/31/2015 1:31:00 AM
Many thanks, dear Ravi for your congratulations and compliments. Enjoy the weekend! Pandita
Date: 10/25/2015 1:23:00 AM
Wow! This deserves the win.... You penned this very great and excellent and it end is beautiful..........A.M.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:39:00 PM
Hi Afolabi, I appreciate your congratulations and wonderful compliments. Thank you, my friend! Pandita
Date: 10/23/2015 3:22:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Pandita!
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:51:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Dr. Sharma, for your wonderful compliments as usual! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 10/22/2015 11:14:00 PM
Lovely write, Pandita, well done! Viv x
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:50:00 AM
Hi Viv, I always appreciate receiving your kind words and compliments. Thank you so much! Pandita
Date: 10/22/2015 8:27:00 PM
Congrats on this fine romanticism and your win my friend!A7
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:49:00 AM
My dear friend, thank you so much for your welcomed congratulations and high score! Pandita
Date: 10/22/2015 5:39:00 PM
very vivid imagery Pandita congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2015 10:48:00 AM
Hi Jan, I appreciate your congratulations and compliments. Thank you, my friend! Pandita

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