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The Rescuer

Solo bird Strayed in the Ocean sky, Prayed. Heaven sent Vulture, Appeared for rescue. Date of Entry : 24-09-2020 Contest : Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor : Joseph May

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/7/2023 11:25:00 PM

Thanks for this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. (John 3:16 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2021 3:35:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

David Smith

Date: 10/4/2021 1:22:00 PM

Interesting piece. Thought provoking, a bit of teaser, with more than one meaning perhaps. If vulture sent by god its nature might be overridden to do good. A fantastic seven lines. I am impressed. David in NZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/2/2021 10:19:00 AM

Interesting thought.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/24/2020 8:13:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile... Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/20/2020 4:37:00 AM

This is great and awesome ! I wonder if you could explain what you picture. You mean a solo bird had strayed and prayed and then a vulture rescued it? Kudos. Congrats! .............................,.........>>>> Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too .

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/2/2020 6:59:00 AM

Hi Jenish, Congrats on your win in Joseph 's contest, Have a wonderful weekend, Blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2020 8:46:00 AM

Very nicely penned Jenish, Congrats on your win..

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2020 5:58:00 AM

Congratulations Jenish! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2020 4:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/28/2020 6:42:00 AM

Interesting poem, Jenish, The power of prayer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2020 5:12:00 PM

Fascinating, Jenish. I always think of vultures in strictly negative terms. You've opened my eyes to a new dimension of the species. Thank you, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/24/2020 3:23:00 AM

so, savior is ready where destroyer schemes filthy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2020 1:58:00 AM

- Great picture, Jenish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)