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The Rememberer

She sits and glances out the window gray The glass just mocks and fogs her weary eyes. The dancing candle fails to light her way As darkness causes heavy, weary sighs. But memory just shades her vision more. A cloak of lies, like ice, then stuns her heart. Her weak and weary feet won't leave the floor, The window tears her wilting soul apart. The sun once lit her flowing, golden hair, And moon once filled her eyes with silver light, But past has killed the gold that once was there And now, her eyes are darker than the night. The days, we say, have worn away her life. But she doth know that t'was her foolish strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/9/2016 11:02:00 PM
Emily, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 2/11/2014 10:18:00 PM
Emily, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:26:00 AM
Hi..Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!.. I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)
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Date: 1/29/2014 6:51:00 AM
Emily Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2014 4:23:00 AM
I love your poem Emily, poetic, filled with words to reach near of nature.Window tears her wilting soul apart".
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Date: 1/29/2014 2:46:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Emily- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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