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The Relic

It looked like a bleached tongue pulled from a mouth, petrified and incapable now of letting a word slide over its calcified silence. I picked it out of the wet sand and held it in my hand. It had little weight, smooth on one side and pitted on the other. A cuttlefish bone. It was a marvel of engineering. My fingers followed its shape, took in its texture, the pleasurable feel of its form. I lifted it to my nose and smelt its salty, faintly fishy odor, sea washed to a clean unsullied smell. It had undergone a change into something beyond life, into an artifact of time. I kept it cradled in my hands, held it like a sacred relic. I have seen them too shrink wrapped in plastic bags on the end of supermarket shelves, a calcium supplement for birds to be hung on a hook inside of a cage. They were selling for $2.50 or thereabouts.

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Date: 3/31/2024 3:39:00 PM
Once again dear Paul, your immense ability to not just let the reader read the words but actually get pulled into them is on full display here. Your descriptions, always full of the senses, are amazing. Like one of my hero’s namely Oscar Wilde, you are a great observer and pen so poetically and artistically wonderful, reflective scenes that captivates the reader. I love and truly appreciate your own unique style of poetry which is inspirational. Really enjoyed reading this. Blessings to you :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/1/2024 5:12:00 AM
Humbled by your words dear Christina, such thoughtful and sensitive comments give encouragement to an old poet and helps me along the path. Your generous spirit is deeply appreciated. I must reacquaint myself with Wilde, haven't read him since my youthful hauntings of the local library. Again, thankyou Christina....blessings.
Date: 3/30/2024 4:37:00 PM
I appreciated your fascination with the cuttlefish bone. I enjoyed your descriptive words in the first verse comparing it to bleached tongue in calcified silence. What an image! I also liked I kept it cradled in my hands, held it like a sacred relic. Those words were ones of respect and awe. A beautifully written poem. Wishing you a wonderful Easter, Sar
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/1/2024 4:57:00 AM
Always good when you can nail an original image, although they normally come out of nowhere, a sudden flash on the minds screen. Feel honored that the poem had something to say and prompted such kind words....valued my dear Sara...hope your Easter had abundant blessings...take care.
Date: 3/30/2024 2:42:00 AM
I went through a range of emotions with this one Paul, think you had me also in the palm of your hand. The appreciation of the find resonated and I was so entranced by rare beauty as depicted by you I'd forgotten where else they are plentiful. What resonated loudly was not letting others views on what we find beauty in affect those moments. Also, perhaps you could write a book of Willason's Poetic Fables - another mesmerising poem that I'm going to fave for the ingenuity and hold it had on me
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/1/2024 4:49:00 AM
Again, your kind words and thoughtful comments deeply appreciated DD. Poetic Fables..I'll give it some thought, probably a place where one could get lost. Pleased that the poem worked a bit of magic...nice to hear...gives my muse a shot of vitamins. Take care my dear friend.

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