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The Redemption of Sin

Darkland of Redemption Forsaken in the least No Friend No Foul No Mortal to be bound Light or Night Which is right? A sinner seeks redemption Before the Baptism of fire Withen Hell's loving embrace The Lord's loving Light Burns the very of Night Those who ask forgiveness receive Those who seek Sin beleive In the end who wins? Free will created Sin God abords Sin Free will created this Hell From which we gained From God's Eden Eve, the Mother of Sin did so out of Love Adem's condemnation is from Trust And yet are we not meant to Love and Trust God The Salvation is our condemnation Who should win> I'll leave it to you Mortals Bound and Found

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Date: 1/31/2016 6:51:00 PM
NARA, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:45:00 PM
Very profound my dear and you as always you amaze me and I am proud of you.....Mistress
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:36:00 AM
Backwards. Sara
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:06:00 AM
A very biblical and deep poem. I enjoyed it. A.W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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