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The Red Rose of the Moulin Rouge

I awaken; the darkened skies my alarm clock I reek of whiskey, scotch and pastis Tumbling out of bed, I reach for a cigarette The dusk harkens as I rise to ply my trade I am embodied inside a one room flat The nightlife and the ladies both coming to life Out the window I see the windmill so famous in red Ladies with offers, men with drinks, the recipe for lust I am the mime of the Moulin Rouge I ready myself with my white painted face Tonight another performance or so it seems I shall juggle my knifes, with my many sad faces Up up up in the air, one, two, three Knifes in a whirlwind of iconic display Around and around like the Moulin Rouge I perform, toss and catch to applause My sad face bows in graceful acknowledgement As they toss their lose coins my way If they see fit to fill my container of misery I make for them my spectacular encore I take a knife, a long black sharp blade Tossed 12 feet in the air, dancing its way back down As it slices the stem of a red rose in my hand I now hand a pretty girl a cut rose The ladies of the evening smile They see I too traded romance for coin How sad it is, this Moulin Rouge of dreams Eleven more roses, and I shall earn my keep Or so the ladies in red believe I, on the other hand, will be changing the last act I am tired of rent and being rented and rented cloth I shall perform the ultimate act finale ce soir Selecting the sharpest set of long fine knifes Lighting them with orange flame, the juggling act begins My audience enthralled, once again Wondering maybe does he ever miss? I never miss, I never shall, this is a certainty The knifes a glow in fire, lighting the nighttime sky, Tossed high, I lie down fast, tossed a rose in the air A Knife as usual cut the rose stem One, two, three, the knifes enter my heart The blood will warm the falling rose As it gently falls upon my silent chest I die with a smile, yes my final act a success The rose so tender upon my breast Breathless all, Gay Paris has died once more I never miss Yet, I miss you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/31/2014 10:23:00 AM
Deep & Dark Arthur, well worth the visit to your page, James :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/31/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you very much James, much appreciated.
Date: 7/28/2014 1:43:00 AM
I felt the misery in the heart. It's ironic. LOVELY. Can you give a first hand interpretation of this poem. thank you.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/28/2014 9:48:00 AM
Just my wild imagination, from wandering the streets of Paris. Thanks John
Date: 5/24/2014 11:17:00 PM
This was such a good write and I enjoyed reading it. TFS Take Care, Jess
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/28/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Jessica, much appreciated!
Date: 5/22/2014 2:08:00 PM
A masterpiece Arthur! Faving this!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Keith, coming from a master like you, a real compliment! Haven t been here as much these days, hope to do some reading this weekend! Cheers!
Date: 5/17/2014 11:57:00 AM
Very well written loved it very much...... Gina.... You took my breath away..... Smiles
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:06:00 PM
I did ? Oh la la !!!
Date: 5/15/2014 11:39:00 PM
This is AWESOME. Your performance was great. I was enjoying it very much, but at the end---- I cried. This will go to my favs. ...Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thank you Lucilla!! :)
Date: 5/12/2014 4:21:00 PM
Stunning poem, I always enjoy reading your works and this is no exception.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:05:00 PM
Thank you yet again A.E I really appreciate it!
Date: 5/12/2014 2:31:00 AM
Excellent write Arthur. Wonderful detail and imagery...an enjoyable read. Good job, cobba. Too right :) ...mel
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:58:00 PM
Cheers, thanks alot Mel
Date: 5/11/2014 7:56:00 PM
You're a poetic powerhouse, Arthur. You are your own genre and you define yourself time and again with every poem you make.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:29:00 PM
Can I frame your comment Jake? Thanks! :)
Date: 5/11/2014 1:15:00 PM
a mix of emotion that makes this piece a rare and sensitive one, arthur.. this is awesome... huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:28:00 PM
You are too kind, hugs right back!!
Date: 5/11/2014 10:10:00 AM
Well my friend you penned an absolutely marvelous story...This one didn't miss
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:27:00 PM
Thanks Tim glad you dropped by.
Date: 5/11/2014 9:57:00 AM
Bravo, bravo! Standing ovation my friend! Absolutely love, love love this piece. More clapping whistling stomping, bravo!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:27:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I am just trying to keep up here!!!
Date: 5/11/2014 7:52:00 AM
Dear Arthur, Quite a compelling poem filled with angst, lust and despair. Engaging in sex with an unknown lady of the night is truly as dangerous as juggling knives. The last two lines are words of wisdom that I'll not forget. But before you die with a smile, "Voulez-vous couchez avec moi, ce soir?" Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:26:00 PM
Oui :) Thanks so much for reading, much appreciated!
Date: 5/11/2014 3:29:00 AM
This grand work Arthur. Congrats on a super job. : )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 5/11/2014 2:01:00 AM
The last stanza...... Cruel passionate death............ The plot I like........ Olive eloisa GBU Art..:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thank you kindly
Date: 5/11/2014 12:09:00 AM
Absolutely superb! What a story.... What am ending. .. What talent you have, Arthur! Wow!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/11/2014 12:17:00 AM
Now it is you that showers me with compliments, I had my doubts, but posted it anyways! Thanks so much!

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