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The Red Rose

When my eyes first found you, you were watering that rose, I couldn't help walking slowly to see you up close. I'd come out here everyday, Just to see you but got nothing to say. Nothing made me happy as to see you there, And see how you shower this red rose with your care. I'd miss you the moment you go away, But i comfort myself in knowing that i will see you here the next day. Then one day i heard a knock on the door, And there you was standing on my floor. You stood there and smiled at me, And a smile spread on my lips for you to see. You gave me a red rose to care for, And from that moment our meetings increased and my love for you grew more and more

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Date: 1/31/2010 11:35:00 AM
Enjoyed this beautiful poetry here. Enjoy your day and hope its wonderful there :) Have a great day. :)
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Date: 1/7/2010 3:20:00 PM
Awesome sweety ^_^ keep up the good work
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Date: 12/24/2009 8:28:00 AM
Nice :)
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Date: 12/24/2009 4:07:00 AM
Very expressive and enjoyable read. Keep your creative pen flowing.
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