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The Red Planet

Pyramids are scattered in a flat plane, as red dust blows once in a while. For millennia, we have read stories of "flying fortresses" or vimanas to Hindus, "flying shields" to Alexander the Great, and "flying eggs" to the Dogon The distant travelers were revered as gods from the stars; gods who know us very well; gods who are us a million years from now....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2015 1:36:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Teddy! Brilliant work!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2015 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 7/27/2015 12:10:00 AM
I hope you're wrong, Teddy, we've already made ourselves Gods whilst stuck on this planet, and look what we've done. Great write, well done. Regards, Viv
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2015 10:45:00 AM
You are right on that one Viv. It's like destruction is embedded in our DNA..... I hope we will be more tranquil when we are able to inhabit other worlds out there.... Thank you for your applause! ;-)
Date: 7/26/2015 5:10:00 PM
TEDDY Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2015 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Date: 7/26/2015 12:43:00 PM
lovely imagery Teddy many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2015 10:42:00 AM
Thanks for your applause and comment Jan! *^_^*

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