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The Red Parasol By Alfred Glendening

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One summer morning on the beach she spies her friend, and runs to greet this lovely child, in solitaire, with a parasol and silken hair. A cherub look upon one's face, while the other smiles, still filled of grace But both are feeling young at heart and can't resist the sand and surf Too soon the whimsy of the day has led them closer to the bay The warm sand and the sea agree to join the ocean's windswept breeze to make their visit more replete with gifts of summer's sweet retreat Perfection offers them a chance to laugh and plot, and take a glance If no one's looking, they can shed their shoes and stockings, free their feet then tiptoe in and shriek in glee! They feel each ripple undertone which tickles toes, and chills their bones and licks the hems of petticoats In pastel shades of vast array they seem two flowers, wild bouquets that dance among the white-washed hue of tide pools blue, and morning's dew Two flowers sprouting here and there cavorting along the sandy shore Until again, it's time to go And though, restrained, as secrets go they must again be proper girls
------------------------------------------------------- 6/20/16 Contest: The Red Parasol by Alfred Glendening Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 7/8/2016 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, great win...
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem congrats well done x
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Date: 7/8/2016 3:47:00 PM
Great imagery and lovely interpretation, Carrie. Congratulations on your First Place win in 'the red parasol' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/8/2016 10:37:00 AM
Proper girls,little ladies for sure:) beautiful Carrie!
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:10:00 AM
Carrie, just beautiful lady..congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/8/2016 8:45:00 AM
This is delightful, Carrie; I loved your images of waves licking petticoats and flowers cavorting on the beach. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/8/2016 7:58:00 AM
Ah, yes, those first "dances" to one's own music....well done Carrie.
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:36:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats for your top placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/8/2016 3:55:00 AM
Carrie I loved the way you described the girls as flowers, wild boquets. A beautiful entry worthy of your first placement! Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/7/2016 11:46:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Carrie, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2016 7:22:00 AM
One of the best I have read this morning. Bravo!
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Date: 6/21/2016 4:20:00 PM
This is very sweet Carrie. Your rhyme adds to the beauty of the scene. I hope to see this a winner Carrie. ; )
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