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Raul Moreno (a Poetry Dish) 4c. of God 1 sm. tsp. of talent (23oz of chromosomes) pkg. Mom (23oz of chromosomes) pkg. Dad ¼ tsp. of my older brother ¼ of my other brother 2 c. of my sister 1 lb. of my surroundings 1 oz. of knowledge ½ c. of heart ½ c. Nature ½ c. Inspiration 3 c. Oklahoma 2 c. of my friends (8oz.) of Pansy 1 pkg. Gracemont ¼ t. failure ¼ t. faith A pinch of discipline A dash of hope Mix contents together, In a large bowl. Top with family members, Better if served cold. Set and let cool, And eat my poetry. Without these ingredients, There would be no me. _______________________________________ An homage to everyone who has supported me, believed in me, and applauded me. Without them, I wouldn't do what I do!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 12:24:00 PM
Your creativity is boundless and amazing.
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:00:00 AM
Nice recipe.
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Date: 4/17/2009 8:27:00 AM
NICE...so creative, I'm checking out some of your other writings right after this sentence...haha..GREAT write...josh
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Date: 4/13/2009 12:00:00 PM
yayayayayayauy awsome
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Date: 4/11/2009 12:22:00 PM
Love this clever poem...only you made one ingredient too skimpy....make that a heaping cup of talent!! Well done, Raul!! love, Carrie
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:24:00 PM
Very creative, I never would have came up with this.
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:11:00 PM
I'm standing up yelling 'Bravo'....Another awesome write my friend.
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:19:00 AM
I trust you will show them Raul.Very encouraging poetics.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:00:00 AM
this is a very cute and really beautiful recipe! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:33:00 PM
Nice way of writing thise, a recipe, that brilliant.
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Date: 4/3/2009 8:20:00 PM
Nice recipe, clever write again. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 4/3/2009 7:50:00 PM
Excellent work, this is a great recipe. Tyler
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Date: 4/3/2009 3:17:00 PM
Very clever Raul. Please sir may I have some more? God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:54:00 PM
What a fabulous dish this is! So many delectable ingredients. It is truly amazing! I am so thankful to have enjoyed the spoils (your wonderful poetry) of this receipe... Great write! brought a smile to my face. Sending smiles back to you from Lolita
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:22:00 PM
There are many powerful ingredients (influences) in your poetry dish, Raul. What a fine tribute this is!
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