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The Realm of Rainy Bliss

A few moments after a hard summer shower we went to get the mail. It was something in which my son, his dog and I certainly could prevail. A trickle of rain ran down the drive, something not to be ignored. With a splash, splash, whomp, whomp, he sent the water really far. Heaven forbid that raging torrent should wash us away you know. So he stood in front watching, making a formidable dam to stop the flow. Then a leaf became a boat, sailing rather quickly down the drive. He stayed in front, mesmerized, and then he finally watched it float on by. With fascination on his face, he watched the trickles’ every move. Then a burly frog came up, a monster king, that from the dog quickly flew. The dog had saved my prince you know, from imprisonment in yonder pond. For the frog was the villain, and within every good story, one must be found. The hero became my prince, as he saved several lowly worms that day. The worms of course declared undying loyalty, as on higher ground they lay. In fact, the whole of the wormy world voweled to help him, that day henceforth. And you never know when the wormy world, will be needed to sally forth. At this time we found the mailbox, and my little prince quickly became engrossed. My neighbor and her daughter were getting theirs, so my son hid behind the post. When she smiled, he smiled back. A truce between kingdoms, now we could boast. And they ran together that day, to every puddle that we did not find remiss. At that point it became apparent, that the prince had found his little princess. They lived happily ever after in the sun and in the rain they couldn’t resist. And all because they’d found each other, that day in their Realm of Rainy Bliss. CSEastman Contest:Litle Kids Again Child: Preschool (3?)

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Date: 2/22/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations carol on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:45:00 AM
great narrative and prose worthy of a win, elaine.. big congrats and huggs
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:52:00 PM
Carol, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:11:00 PM
Carol, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
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Date: 7/26/2014 7:26:00 AM
Oh, the innocence of childhood such a wonder to watch. Very much enjoyed reading this one, Carol.... Robert.
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:15:00 PM
life is sweet but incomplete, but there came facination....:}
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:23:00 PM
Move over Mr. Aesop.... You have some competition. Great writing, sweet poetess... It is a very enjoyable read.... Jake
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Date: 10/2/2013 7:44:00 AM
Very entertaining! I enjoyed it a lot.
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:39:00 PM
A sweet story that brought back good memories of childhood. You are a great story-teller, Carol! Wonderful work!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 9/26/2013 1:07:00 PM
Well that was a nice story. :o) Very pleasant. Nice to see you stopping by my page. It's nice to know we still have caring people who find shelter for loving animals.
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Date: 9/14/2013 2:19:00 PM
love the humor in this excellent poem Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/14/2013 11:24:00 AM
A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING I ENJOYED
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Date: 9/13/2013 1:07:00 PM
Hi Carol, Nice write with a fairy tale theme.. Ken
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:52:00 AM
- A enjoyable poem Carol ...... it is good that there are still "frog prince" :))) - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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