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The Reality of Us

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you know of none who loves the way I can for I am love incarnate, made to taste the time we've spent on others, what a waste! I am the woman to complete your man we are as one, the emblem of desire a testament to truthfulness of love the oneness of the eagle and the dove when merging, we ignite in blazing fire between your soul and mine there is no space the elements around us melt away each time we come together in this way there is no time, not even just a trace to emulate our love, others will try but none can feel the searing of this flame we live to please each other, without shame our passion gives us impetus to fly my love, my soul and body, yours to hold from in your mouth is where my breath I take the movement of your hands make dreams to wake to lie with you, my self to you I've sold this moment, here, this time is why I live take now my wealth, and learning, every thing the essence of true love is what you bring and I, in turn, my all to you I give Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/6/2020 8:02:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this sensual piece again. Hugs Rick.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/30/2017 5:22:00 AM

I've never attempted enclosed rhyme, but you are the master at it. It works so well on this sensual write, making it all the more romantic. I love it...Maria

Eve Roper

Date: 10/29/2017 7:02:00 PM

So very sensual and passionate, Eileen , love reading your write... Hug Eve~`*

Carol B.

Date: 10/29/2017 3:53:00 PM

Wow!! Eileen you sure know how to write hot romantic pieces. Enjoyed the read :)

John Gondolf

Date: 10/29/2017 11:59:00 AM

Wow, Eileen, so passionate and sensual. I think the “queen of passionate pen” is an appropriate title. The internal rhyme was perfect. John

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2017 1:14:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, John. That was a title given to me by fellow poet, Richard. It is a dear one. I appreciate the visit.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/29/2017 10:32:00 AM

So sensual and beautiful, I loved this as I love all your writes, the lines "the oneness of the eagle and the dove when merging, we ignite in blazing fire" oh la la :) Hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2017 10:35:00 AM

Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked this piece. :) I love writing of love and all things romantic and passionate. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2017 10:31:00 AM

Ooh la la la wowzer. Another hot one! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2017 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, Richard. Hadn't written a hot one in a while. I'm glad you liked this piece. I tried my hand at internal rhyme. I enjoyed the experience. :)

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2017 8:09:00 AM

Very passionate Eileen..

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thank you, SO. I appreciate the visit.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/28/2017 7:00:00 PM

a beautiful and very sensual poem, eileen! you never cease to amaze me with your ability to convey such passion in your words...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/29/2017 9:23:00 AM

Thanks, dear. I try. I wanted to write something using enclosed rhyme and the stanzas sort of wrote themselves. :) Happy to have your visit. Hugs