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The Real Grief

Hearts are swollen, Tears are a constant flow. People are morning, But it’s all just for show. Clad in black, I sit on the last aisle. A veil covers my face, My eyes are quiet. I’ll say a few words, Just so they know I care. But I know that you know, Because I was always there. A labyrinth of emotions, Has engulfed me so deep. The unshed tears, Slowly piling up in a heap. Agony, anger, angst, Stifle my mind. A tranquil place, Is getting harder to find. It makes me incensed, To see them cry. They didn’t know you, How could they, when they didn’t try? And yet they are here, Saying that they loved you, But I sit quiet, Because I still do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/29/2014 1:16:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. It resonates with me in the remembrance of a loved one I lost. Emotions felt just like this. Well written, friend.
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Date: 12/20/2014 9:38:00 AM
Paakhi,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2014 7:59:00 AM
- Welcome to P - Soup !!!! .... A Christmas smile two you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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