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The black ravens’ peer deep into the darkness; Bracing upon cold marble and granite stone, Beneath the ghostly moon's shadows in starkness. Gray as gray, the ravens’ mock upon its groan Absence of light and nostalgic clandestine. Bleak night and nothing more wreathe the granite shrine. 9/28/2019 Photo #2 Poetry Contest: Make IT Six Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 10/3/2019 10:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win with this wonderful poem.Great imagery.
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Date: 10/3/2019 8:48:00 PM
You captured the somber scene well Eve, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 9/29/2019 5:31:00 AM
Very dark and a little spooky... you created vivid imagery in this one..
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:14:00 AM
This is totally amazing.. I love it. I used the same image but didn't do anywhere near as well. Your words are wonderful. God bless you
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