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The Raven Waits

It is cold among the shadows, where heavy tears belong Behind the gates, and iron locks, where sinking headstones dwell Where names that time erases, are deeply etched with tales One walks here in the dim, gray light, where the ravens weave their spell There are legends, told in secret.. from deep below the earth... In whispered tongues, they wonder,...does the raven wait for death? Black ebony has circled. Is a feather just a quill? Or...do the stories hold some merit...are they illusions of the chill? A moss covered headstone crumbles, and tumbles with a touch A raven's gaze seems evil, has he brushed the devil's wrath? A voice of anguish rises, with an echo from the mist And the silence comes, and all is still,.....or are legends simply myths? Black heart, no shame.... a moth to flame A caw cries out, , ..."how great the cost!" They perch and watch and find a nest, among the webbed design The lilies and the laurel...a tangled garden climbs entwining over markers...that only wither on the vine A raven waits, as nightfall comes, as fog and returns again Another night, another life, will end again on time ______________________________ Inspired By Kelly's Contest: The Raven (Poe) 10/4/14

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Date: 10/14/2014 8:50:00 AM
Congrats Carrie.
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Date: 10/13/2014 9:56:00 PM
Nicely painted piece with words, Carrie, congrats
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:46:00 PM
I really liked the mystery, and the questions that were asked throughout your poem. The imagery was also very chilling! A fantastic write, Carrie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/9/2014 4:19:00 PM
Chills down my spine!! How do you manage to write free verse with a rhyme scheme? Terrifying and beautiful. Hands down 1st place...
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Date: 10/6/2014 10:32:00 AM
Outstanding write my very dear friend Carrie. I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your loving greetings on my b-day. God bless you always! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/5/2014 8:23:00 PM
very beautifully painted piece excellent pen carrie
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Date: 10/4/2014 8:06:00 PM
If this doesn't end up in the top three I'll eat my Raven. Hat. I meant Hat. If this doesn't end up in the top three I'll eat my Hat. I. I don't know where I got Raven. Excellent, poem, loved it I meant Hat.
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Date: 10/4/2014 8:04:00 PM
Excellently penned Carrie. You should so well with this.
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