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THIS POEM IS ABSTRACT AND WILL NOT BE EVERYBODY'S CUP OF TEA. IT IS A CHANGE OF PACE FOR ME.  IF YOU STUDY THE PHOTOGRAPH THE WHOLE POEM IS DERIVED FROM IT.

 

it was ill thought, my idea spoken that sat in the trees that branched out unlit. i tried to keep it quiet,  when the finger on your lip  screamed out to me to shush  but the lit bodies in your multi toned hair never warned the raven black ravens, not to tell. the ones that took flight against a wallpapered sky  into a fully rounded moon. they squawked it to the clouds who warned the wind,  that blew it to the mountains  and they echoed it across the land. that's when the silence broke. but your other hand took the words away and still motionless they wonder what it was they knew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/24/2014 3:15:00 PM
The image is certainly my cup of tea Maurice. Terrific piece, dark write, just what did the ravens know. Quite a few of my dark poems are about Crows, Ravens & Rooks. They have a spellbounding thrall to them, James :)
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Date: 9/14/2014 4:09:00 PM
I enjoyed the unique photo and this interesting write that leaves me with a sense of wonderment. A beautiful piece of art, Maurice!
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Date: 9/14/2014 12:41:00 AM
I like this one. I like the photo and the poem. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/14/2014 12:41:00 PM
thank you Gina. love you.

Book: Shattered Sighs