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The Raven Angel

Into the beautiful grey twilight As I descended from above That raven dress, those raven hair Delicate white shoulders held those straps My form perfect innocence... Overlooking the chiselled tombstones As I gazed..... into the realm of death In the darkness of the grave I spied utter peace.......? No visions, no hopes, no tears Only the cold tombstone and me The souls I mean to carry!!!!!!!! Flying like those ravens Huddled in my arms these spirits so sweet Thick fog settles down As I reach beyond death To foretell the Dark Truth That sad humanity must ultimately feel Death comes a calling Bringing with her dark beauty Chilling and exquisite Like an owl’s screech------- Or passing wolf’s howl... In these grey shadows and darkened cavern I remain still, to hear the sweet sound Of flowing river which must stop at sea The ravens crow my silent musings away I free the souls, the elements rage As morning breaks over the hills... By-Tahera Mannan Contest-Among the Dead Sponsored by-Constance La France ~The Rambling Poet~

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Date: 2/24/2011 11:59:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:16:00 AM
Many congratulations Tahera on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:24:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/18/2011 6:38:00 AM
This was one of my favorites of all the entries, Tahera. So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:37:00 AM
my kind of write, tahera.. CONGRATS with higggs..:) nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:31:00 AM
Great sotry, Tahera. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:34:00 PM
Tahera, congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this impressive write.
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:18:00 PM
Tahera great job and congratulations on your eighth place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of constance, Tahera
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Tahera! Well deserving. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:55:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your wonderful win in Among the Dead contest with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another grand victory and sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:29:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:38:00 AM
Wow....well done Tahera!! This is a difficult contest...and you did a fantastic job!
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Date: 1/14/2011 6:18:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 1/14/2011 3:00:00 AM
Your message about the way death eventually calls on all of us is conveyed so profoundly in this free verse style, Tahera. I'm sure Constance will love reading your poem as much as I did. The images are magnificent, but the message is even more powerful. Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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