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The Rarest Tale of Love

Today my heart is caught in a great dilemma, It is unusual,uncommon & very rare, when mind stops to think,but heart continues its work, today i am in that stage of love. This tragedy with someone is really very rare, That secret of my life today i want to share, Unconditional & uncertain towards him i was walking, At that moment mind was ceased to think what i was doing. That extreme care & commitment so intense, this was the only feeling in my whole soul which i can sense, but in a second got shattered all my dream, When i realize that in his world,only a little i mean. my life entered in that darkness,where light even fears to go, The lips which were ever smiling,on those lips now smile fears to grow. At that worst moment of life,someone entered my lane, I couldn't even noticed that he loved me like an insane. Now here also once again got repeated the tale, situation made me so, that to love him i fail, It was impossible for me to fall in love anymore, 'Love' & 'me' became the two sides of a seashore. This was the tale uptil here, about which you can think that isn't so rare, But there is a truth making it EXTRAORDINARY, Not a lie,not a story,it is something real about me. About the two person i told were not the different two, Yeah he was the same whom i loved,& who loved me too. The situation made him so different at different time, That's the RARENESS with the life of mine. I never got the one,whom i really loved, He never got the one,whom he really loved, With every breath now,myself melting i find, I broked someone's heart & couldn't even saved mine

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Date: 2/21/2016 10:41:00 AM
Zainab, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 8:09:00 PM
Zainab :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:40:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Zainab. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:19:00 AM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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