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The Ramped Heavens

Kashmir is the heaven as they say Fom years i have been watching deaths at the bay Some come with metals,some burn the petals Here you are safer only if you stay dumb With all oppression i am numb Guns they carry like peacemaking gadgets Bombs they drop like ingle bells Music to ears their canister shells Blinded children and wailing mums Democracy long back was locked in drums No where I find my childhood chums I will write and speak unless to all the oppressed freedom comes

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Black Matta

Date: 8/28/2015 6:01:00 PM

The world is full of sorrows. All the best for you.

Kamran Rashid
Date: 9/3/2015 5:26:00 PM

HEY matta ty for you time tough

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/27/2015 8:30:00 AM

So true hate rots you from within and seldom worries who or what you hate at all while love heals & sets you on a path to growth-love creates an endless universe-hate a bottomless hole! Light & Love

Kamran Rashid
Date: 8/28/2015 2:09:00 PM

THANK YOU debbie , your words are just a lesson to me..love@burningsoulz

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 4/30/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Kamran, Much appreciated :)

Naghmeh Heidari

Date: 4/28/2015 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Kamran for reading my poems. I wish for peace everywhere

Kamran Rashid
Date: 4/29/2015 1:05:00 PM

thank you for finding some time ,,wish you the same Nagmeh may allah bestow you and us all and guide us to the best

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 4/9/2015 9:18:00 PM

May God protect all the honest people. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, thanks for sharing ,and for visiting my page, much appreciated. Fatima

Kamran Rashid
Date: 4/29/2015 1:06:00 PM

thank you fatima

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/8/2015 2:47:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

Kamran Rashid
Date: 4/8/2015 9:41:00 AM

thank you for getting the thought,, i would love to read some from you sir as its alwz soulful ,nd a blessing#

Manya Saxena

Date: 4/8/2015 2:02:00 AM

your poem depicted so many emotions in one flow. i've been to kashmir , its a beautiful place to be in but its also true that people grow up way to fast there. loved your poem truly. Manya

Kamran Rashid
Date: 4/8/2015 12:54:00 PM

also true that people grow up way to fast there.,,than kyou manya

Sanja Cokolic

Date: 4/7/2015 5:55:00 AM

"Here you are safer only if you stay dumb" .. it became universal rule unfortunately :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/1/2015 3:34:00 AM

That's great! I heard & read about the nature & people' beauty in Kashmir.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 3/31/2015 10:33:00 AM

I always admire Kashmir's charms so i found this poem very appealing. People keep provoking and oppressing the muslims then muslims react ah. Evrybody's jealous of muslims. War is destroyin the appeal of kashmir as yor great poem tels in brevity. Thumbs up and so nice to read u again. Tnx 4 yer coment too.

Kamran Rashid
Date: 3/31/2015 12:01:00 PM

it is not only evrbdy,, iguess we also..we need to be 1#and tnkyou fr your time,understanding and love i hope we will bring good thngs out and i really wish to write somethng accrdngly wth u looking forward