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The Rain's Came

The early spring rain pounds the earth washing sleep from the eye of dawn conducting percussive rebirth. The early spring rain pounds the earth bringing the pattering of mirth as awakened the violets yawn. The early spring rain pounds the earth washing sleep from the eye of dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/8/2012 7:52:00 AM
yes me too..rainy day LONG NAP!
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Date: 5/7/2012 11:37:00 PM
Well i have enjoyed this one Debbie liked the washing sleep from the eye of dawn bit; i can tell you one thing though!! Over here its made the people sleep in.." although not the dawn.."
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Date: 5/6/2012 10:38:00 AM
love that interesting violets yawn!!! soupmail.
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Date: 5/5/2012 4:02:00 PM
beautiful triolet indeed, debs. Congrats on your wins
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:36:00 PM
Wow!wonderful!!
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:44:00 PM
washing sleep from eye of dawn....(love that line!) :)
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:35:00 PM
Very nice poem Debbie, I love the spring rain, there is something so soothing about it, and thanks for all your great comments on my poetry
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:06:00 PM
Very cool, Debbie...very cool. I need to study poetry. I didn't even know what a triolet was. Ha! Mine just come out however and I'm at a loss as to what to call them. A fan-Caleb Smith
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Date: 5/4/2012 2:29:00 PM
Ps. Smile ˜ "Tis No Secret By Now, My Beautiful Debbie, As Unto How Much I Love You, 'My Beautiful Love.'" *
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Date: 5/4/2012 2:25:00 PM
Smile ˜ A Pretty & Lovely Poem, By A Very Gifted & Beautiful Woman * I Find More Of The Opportunity Within This Moment To Your Tell Your Beauty, Again ˜ My Beautiful Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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