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The Raining of Leaves

A cool Autumn breeze Wilts the foliage of trees, The leaves slowly fall. * The leaves slowly fall Waving their way to the ground, Wafting, side to side. * Wafting, side to side Dancing in an Autumn breeze, The raining of leaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 10:36:00 PM
Clever title, again nice choka
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:17:00 PM
Lovely scene the raining of leaves.
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:50:00 PM
Describes fall to a 'T'.
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:36:00 PM
I believe your nature poems are my favorites
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Date: 4/9/2009 6:22:00 PM
Ooh, I like it. I can see the leaves floating down in the breeze. Nice write.
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:12:00 PM
this is truly beautiful Raul...it brings a sense of pure piece to the reader's soul.....great work...as always....Maryam~
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:35:00 PM
There's a delicate lilt in the language that works wonders here, Raul! For some reason, I perceive death sidling up with vast patience while humming a slow showtune. Man, I gotta lay off the caffeine! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:21:00 PM
Another inspirational write but you had me at the beach and now you have taken me back, don't want to go to the cold again. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:01:00 PM
wonderful, masterful super write another gem
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:59:00 PM
hypnotic, just vigorously shook my head after being blown away by this great poem! Raul, jmg
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