Get Your Premium Membership

The Rain and the Pain

Beside me, a peacock sat, Quiet, as we both awaited the rain. The garden around us, dry and eager, Longed for the sky's nurturing gift. A gentle rain began to fall, Caressing us, tickling every sense. The peacock burst into a dance, A whirl of colours, a fleeting joy. My heart sang with the earth's spin, Tears of happiness joined the rivers' chorus. But the peacock fled for cover—why? What turned the bright clouds dark? The dance stopped, replaced by fear, Twigs once dry now adrift in chaos. Tears of joy tainted with dread, Petals faded, their vibrancy washed away. The nests, my hut, all swept aside, By the storm's indifferent might. I shouted, "Hold on! It's time to save, For one life holds a world within." Is this the price of thunder's roar, Of dark clouds and raging waters? Hands reach out, seeking help, Prayers rise, hoping to be heard. Where is the Divine in this deluge? Are our voices lost in the storm? My tears, once bold, now diluted, I had a gift, a date to keep. "Don't let me be lost," I plead, As the wait ends and the moment nears. Everyone rushes to escape the flood, "Let me leap," I beg, "to safety's side." emm*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/23/2014 12:02:00 AM
I like your word choices and connections, Rain trickles down, it sprinkles, it blesses. The rain causes muddy whirls, etc. Many great images here, Malik. :)
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/23/2014 12:09:00 AM
Thanks Dear Darlene for your time and for the nice comment.. stay blessed
Date: 9/22/2014 12:48:00 AM
I love when it rains, except when it starts falling at the worst possible time!.... I really enjoyed this unique write. Your words seem to flow so effortlessly here. Beautiful poem, Malik!
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/22/2014 12:53:00 AM
Thanks Kelly for your kind words and for your visit..,God bless,, malik
Date: 9/15/2014 1:45:00 AM
What a deep motion of words, I so love how you use the beauty of nature to expess emotions. This is wonderful Malik, eautiful indeed
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/15/2014 2:29:00 AM
Many many thanks dear Sibanda for your warm and sweet words.. Hugs,,, hope to see you again.. friend Always,, Malik
Date: 9/14/2014 11:58:00 PM
Soulful rendering of emotion, Malik. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/15/2014 12:00:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your sweet comment..Elaine, Friend Always..... malik
Date: 9/14/2014 8:37:00 AM
Back again to read your writes, found this gem! You have he soul of a true poet! I give this write a solid 7 rating and applaud your poet's heart as well!
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/14/2014 11:06:00 PM
I feel like speechless after reading your kind words, you are so kind poet here... it really means a lot and keeps the hope alive to keep going.. many many thanks Mr Robert for reading and rating my poems.
Date: 9/13/2014 9:29:00 AM
Great job! I liked the rhythm looks quite natural this shows your deep feeling and love in your poems. I loved the questions in your poem. Keep up!
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/14/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sirat for stopping by and your appreciation.. God bless you.. friend always, malik
Date: 9/11/2014 4:25:00 PM
Ahhh yes nature mirroring the turmoil of man's heart. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/14/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thanks Debbie for reading my poem and a nice comment.
Date: 9/10/2014 1:44:00 PM
you have the soul of a poet. thank you for a fine read.
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/10/2014 11:30:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem Mr.Maurice, you are so kind. soul of a poet is really an invaluable comment... Stay blessed... Malik
Date: 9/10/2014 11:09:00 AM
Very nice poem in which a fine rhythm of your heart is seen. Loved always,my friend,bl
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/10/2014 11:28:00 PM
Thanks sir, for stopping by and a nice comment... Wish to see you again around.. God Bless you. :)
Date: 9/10/2014 7:06:00 AM
Your words are intricately powerful and moving..:)
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/10/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thanks dear olive :) GBU
Date: 9/9/2014 4:50:00 AM
beautifully painted excellent piece malik
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/9/2014 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Liam for giving your time and for a nice comment... God bless. Malik
Date: 9/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
This is a most lovely piece here... wow! The peacocks reminded me of Pasadena. They're everywhere, roaming about. Anyway, back to this poem...remarkable imagery... this is just fantastic! Thanks for posting and sharing. Keep up the great work! Always, Laura
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/8/2014 9:02:00 AM
Thanks a lot Laura, your words like a dose of adrenaline, boosting the person to work more and more without sense of fatigue.. really encouraging.. HUGS and love.. coming to mu poem, your word Pasadena fits well here, i wrote it considering the sufferings of "Valley of Kashmir" Stay blessed Dear.
Date: 9/7/2014 6:12:00 PM
A hearty welcome to the Soup Malik. This is a very refreshing poem. I have enjoyed the read. Sending a smile, Verlena
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/8/2014 8:54:00 AM
Your smile is great Dear Verlena, keep smiling always and ever. thanks a lottttt for your kind words.
Date: 9/7/2014 3:05:00 PM
A warm welcome to the Soup Malik from Hawaii. I have digested your palpable poem with tender emphathetic satisfaction. You have a wonderful talent conveyed in a visceral truth that is profoundly beautiful! Aloha, Connie
Login to Reply
Yaseen Avatar
Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/8/2014 8:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot Dear Connie.. Thanks for your beautiful and warm words, and a warm welcome.. Your words give a boost to a youngster like me, hugs and heaps of thanks. I actually wrote it remembering the flood in Kashmir these days causing havoc..

Book: Reflection on the Important Things