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The Rain

As you are with me for a while The clouds are massively agile The sun has lent them its colors The hours are visibly very jealous Inside the wonderful moisture virile Now it has started drizzling The red blood cells are bristling The blood vessels are whistling Heart beats are listening And quick comes the downpour Rain splashes on window glass Rain lashes on flower vase Rain releases the evergreen grass The Rain, ah, it is delicious Blessed is the thirsty earth This way birds this way please We are in the happy street _____________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/3/2016 1:17:00 AM
Very interesting way of expressing yourself.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/3/2016 3:58:00 AM
Well, thank you.
Date: 2/1/2016 4:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this happy , inspired poem my friend. A7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/3/2016 3:59:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/1/2016 4:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this happy , inspired poem my friend. A7
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:00:00 AM
Well written verse, Probir. Great Imagery. Growing up on the farm, rain meant we got a day off from work in the fields, so naturally I have always liked rain. Love the last two lines!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/3/2016 4:01:00 AM
Thank you cona...
Date: 2/1/2016 10:57:00 AM
Well written verse, Probir. Great Imagery. Growing up on the farm, rain meant we got a day off from work in the fields, so naturally I have always liked rain. Love the last two lines!
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