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The Rain

Staring into a cloudless sky I feel the rain begin to pour Wearing a raincoat He splashes in the puddles Mouth open Raindrops dances on his tongue I stare into Venus Until the storm subsides Free her mind A storm will follow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 5:39:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Quilisa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/09/2012
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Date: 8/7/2012 3:22:00 AM
Loving the images here..very nice!!
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Quilisa Miller
Date: 8/7/2012 3:54:00 PM
Thank you! My first work in a really long time, I appreciate the encouragement!

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