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The Rain

The rain is all around the place.
Springtime rain falls at a steady pace.
Water is the life-giver of the earth.
A gift to all from heaven.
Forever earth be blessed.
Winter’s steadfast grip has finally let go.
Once again, it’s time for the flowers to grow.
The falling rain is their wake-up call.
In a plethora, see the children fall.
Diminutive raindrops descend from the sky.
Resembling diamonds, all over the earth they lie.
Like little gems of inestimable worth,
see the little shoots surge out of the earth.
It’s a spring shower.
Let’s go out into the rain.
We’ll get soaking wet. By Robert Pettit for Constance LaFrance’s Nature Four-In-One contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 11:20:00 PM
oh, so many sweet lines in this one. Loved the "plethera" word and diminutive raindrops like diamonds! Congrats on your win, Robert!
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Date: 3/7/2011 5:57:00 PM
An awesome write from you Robert!Congrats on your big win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:28:00 PM
CongraTULations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Robert
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:55:00 PM
Such an inviting write Robert, congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's Nature, Four In One contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:33:00 AM
This makes me happy.....a welcome rain indeed!! Congratulations Robert.....great job!!
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Date: 3/7/2011 6:21:00 AM
Well done Robert...makes me want to go out in the rain today. Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:27:00 AM
This sure is of inestimable worth Robert. Warm congrats.
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Date: 3/6/2011 10:29:00 PM
excellent Robert, well deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine 3rd Place win, Robert! Another beauty! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert! So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:18:00 PM
Congrats Robert on your great big win in Constance's contest with these amazing lines so beautiful luv.. enjoy another sweet victory..
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:14:00 AM
This poem creates a smile across my face, for spring is my favorite season of the year:) thanks!
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:58:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/28/2011 1:04:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:33:00 AM
Outstanding entry for Constance's contest, Robert. I love the four-in-one combo that leaves us appreciating the feel of rain! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2011 10:13:00 PM
Very nice and enjoyed the read! Good luck in the contest. Caroline.
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