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The Rain

I watch the rain from the porch, as it forms puddles in the yard. I step on the grass, the rain chills me to the bone. It's gentle, yet fierce. It slides off my skin, yet it touches my heart. It washes away the hurt, the pain and the tears. It washes everything away and for a moment I am grateful. But then I step out of the rain and it all comes back. The good byes, the tears, and worst of all, the pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/11/2010 1:15:00 PM
Very nice expressions on the the rain, Cheyenne
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Date: 12/11/2010 12:49:00 PM
Cheyenne; I got goose bumps reading this one honey... The rain has the opposite effect on me. It reminds me of pain and difficult times. I wrote about it too "My rainy day". I love how you feel the rain "washes away the hurt". Fabulous job...Lay
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