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The Rain

The rain smelled different when I was young Not yet a care, living for fun I’m no longer young, but not yet old Responsibility has taken hold The rain still comes, heavy and light Awakening my senses to a new height Still searching for the rain I knew when I was young Before innocence had come undone But now that I’ve seen the rain in so many a different place I fear the rain of my youth has been erased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 8:50:00 PM
good write read my poem "righteous rain"
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Date: 9/28/2010 2:33:00 PM
well done Dan, enjoyed your poem, thoughts and memory sad things we go thru that mage us forget. Have a nice one,..LeeAnn
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Date: 8/17/2010 3:08:00 PM
Great metaphoric language that you have used in this write..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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Date: 8/17/2010 3:40:00 AM
Nice thoughts well expressed on The Rain
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:04:00 AM
it's the little things in life i enjoy, this about rain is as good as it gets, awesome. Harry
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