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The Rain

Today was the day I would see the sky.... but the rain messed it up...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/22/2020 9:24:00 AM
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Short and Sweet.Loved the story.Hope it stops raining.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/8/2020 5:20:00 PM
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Some days are rainy days, but in mine it's always a storm...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/30/2020 2:29:00 PM
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Great job with this metaphorical one. Congrats on the winl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2020 1:09:00 PM
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- Congratulations on your great winning line, Mark :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/29/2020 10:46:00 AM
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Great imagery in just one line Monoku,Mark. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2020 6:31:00 AM
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Oh disappointment! Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 4:36:00 AM
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You must be somewhere near where I live!! Congrats on your win!!
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Silent One
Date: 8/29/2020 2:51:00 AM
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Happens a lot here in the UK! Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Mark Anthony Bartolo
Date: 8/29/2020 3:55:00 AM
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Thanks for the second place. I did not expect it :)

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