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The Raging Ocean

The Raging Ocean Offering the boat one last chance, the raging ocean sends one last wave. The boat imagines the old times when the waves were rolling under it. Realizing that it will never float again, the boat surrenders to the raging ocean, allowing the water to wrap around it. The raging ocean senses the fear of the boat, so it sends one final blow to make the boat give up on its foe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/16/2016 1:28:00 AM
great imagery....SKAT---
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Date: 5/15/2016 11:00:00 PM
Great imagery, Logan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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