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The Ragged Man

(tick)…sweet dark my thoughts ever consume (tock)…haunting dream dethrone (tick)…ocean pyre blackness sing (tock)…unfolding deep her wary wing …tick ……tock ………tick (tick)…gurgled hum from sickly bulb (tock)…hanging cord decay (tick)…sway above my spinning bed (tock)…waning wicked water thread …tick ……tock ………click (tick)…breath from rage caress my skin (tock)…alight my morbid muse (tick)…two beads of light through window pine (tock)…rise Orion eye align …click ……tock ………click (tick)…a scarecrow there in gnarled husk (tock)…ragged man askew (tick)…bent is he in kernel maze (tock)…two oil drops unholy gaze …tick ……tock ………tick (tick)…through dusky brine I drag my clock (tock)…’til shadows we did touch (tick)…a sickly click his jaw did snap (tock)…consuming me eternal trap …click ……click ………click Dark priest Buried moon Shivering Wipes mouth Before closing Book Sideways, glances at Me Man, askew on Dancing stick Slack-jaw Dumb ...click

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Date: 11/15/2023 10:31:00 PM
Interesting for poem...introspective nature seems a bit suspicious..expressed creatively
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:41:00 PM
gratitude, to you
Date: 11/12/2023 1:02:00 PM
Profound work, Mat. So dark, but if it weren't, where would be your heart. :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/12/2023 7:46:00 PM
indeed :| - my appreciation
Date: 11/12/2023 4:24:00 AM
Mat, there's a dark rhythm to this that is accented with wonderful alliteration and the repeating of tick tock and click. Really great when read out loud. Thanks
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/12/2023 7:47:00 PM
thank you for taking the time, jeff
Date: 11/12/2023 2:33:00 AM
This is very creative writing. I love the beat of this poem and how it flows in such eloquence, especially love the line “…waning wicked water thread” those alliterations are brilliant! Another artistic and mellifluous poem from you. Pleasure reading this.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/12/2023 7:46:00 PM
thank you, empress

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