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The Race

The gust of wind, the twist of pedals, the race till sunset, with no medals. My way will be on even roads or in a coppice on potholes. The Sun's zenith, there is no grief, the wheels, embracing the relief, will bear me uphill and downhill. They break my sp'rit to be revealed. The day for long, the night not soon, each mile is dear on the route. Press on my pedals in a distance to be delayed death by resistance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/22/2012 1:51:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative and expressive work..That was one more bike ride..Sara
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Oleg Borisov
Date: 7/23/2012 2:04:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! I enjoy riding my bike this summer :^)
Date: 5/9/2012 8:17:00 AM
really like this Aleh, love the rhyme and the flow of the poem, also the break in sp'rit. harry
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Oleg Borisov
Date: 5/10/2012 2:21:00 AM
thanks Harry, im glad you appreciate it.
Date: 3/22/2012 5:56:00 AM
Aleh, i like your metaphors in your poems,,, especially the image of coppice's on potholes... no matter the hill... your doing a good job not stopping the race... have yourself a wonderful day~LUV*PD
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Oleg Borisov
Date: 3/22/2012 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, dear Poet, im glad you like it.

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