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I look out at the white capped waves Thinking of what my heart so craves. To spend a day alone with you That is what I most want to do! To stroll along the boulevard, Then dine on food most avant-garde To picnic in an emerald glade Sipping sparkling lemonade. To sit and chat of love and life Then asking you to be my wife. What answer would you give to me While I was still on bended knee?

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Date: 10/20/2015 7:27:00 AM
You've created a lovely setting for a proposal.. Shane. Love the imagery of the emerald glade and lemonade. How could she refuse a man who plans such a romantic offer? I hope this proposal, if it was real, didn't end the way it did in the picture.
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Date: 10/19/2015 10:37:00 PM
I'm sure if you gave this poem at the same time, it would be a winning proposal. I enjoyed the gentle flow of this poem. Lovely write
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