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The Question

I remember the day so very clear. I was alone for so very long. Emptyness was my heart untill you were here. A dark rose that shed light. A perfect answer. To a question unknown from spite. We found soliace in arms covered in emotional scars. You lost in gloom. I from the bars. I write to you from the depths of my heart. That are time is eternal. Eventhough in this moment we are apart. That message in a bottle will always read the same. Julia Elizabeth Loveless. You have taken my heart now I ask will you take my name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2013 9:53:00 AM
Good morning John, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA...
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:01:00 PM
i laugh at your embarssment
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Date: 9/25/2009 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful John. Again I Find Myself Among Inspiration. Many Of Your Words Bring Me To Tears. Reming Me Sometime To Tell You Of Michael... He Was My Love, And My Deepest Scar.
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Date: 9/18/2009 6:05:00 PM
how sweet John..what a sweet proposal,,will i be invited to the wedding?:)well penned,,sweet write indeed-Charma
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Date: 9/16/2009 6:12:00 AM
John Robbins, Reading your romantic poetry this morning has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing your words. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:52:00 PM
Dear John, I hope her answer is "yes." It's such a comfort when two people who have been inflicted with "emotional scars" are able to rise above the pain and let into their hearts again. In my opinion, nothing can top a proposal made through poetry. Skip the bended knee; grace her heart with poetry. Excellent writing as always, John! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/14/2009 11:23:00 AM
Johns Patrick Robbins i will take your last name. You have taken my heart as well as i have taken yours. I love you.
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Date: 9/14/2009 10:31:00 AM
Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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