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The Queen of Hearts

There she sits with grace, and dainty Satin dressed, a charming lady; Her dark blue eyes and golden tresses, Adorns a face that heaven blesses. Gems and jewels shining, gleaming, As the queen of hearts sits there dreaming; Where she sits in lonely fashion, Not fit to share her only passion Of love for kings and love for jewels, Not to mention her share of fools. The king of hearts comes for his lady, Down the path neath trees so shady; Over hill in stately fashion, Rides the king with all his bastion. Drums are beating, trumpets blowing, With the horses onward going; Down the street on feet that clattered, As if the dream was all that mattered; There to meet his blue eyed lover, A prized illusion to discover; And all the joy that rang from rafter, Was nothing more than daydream's laughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2012 8:08:00 PM
The hook is so cleverly contained in the last two lines... you disguise it so well. Lovely language, imagery, flow and rhyme from your masterful pen.
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Date: 9/13/2011 3:12:00 PM
Ah, but if not for daydream's splendor, what deary dismal lives we'd render, to reach beyond reality's shore, to capture a dream and dream it no more. T.B.
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:28:00 PM
a great piece of creative poetry at its best. thank you for commenting on Wild Baby Rabbit.
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:47:00 PM
Great ending for this fantastical write. I used to daydream like this all the time. YOu know you are not young anymore when the daydreams stop!
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:16:00 AM
awesome poem! i loved your descriptions and what a sense of flow - all the way to the powerful ending. well done!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:48:00 PM
this is a good poem. good write!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:21:00 PM
Fear within shall never conquer. Your thoughts and words, my soul, always stir. Your gift is very much alive. Just relax, and enjoy the drive.
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:48:00 PM
My dell has a service plan now and it is running like a marathon winner.....just try and keep up with me now! hehe
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:32:00 PM
wow elizabeth this was a grand write.. I almost thought it might be for my new contest it is so terrific..luv.. enjoyed..
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Date: 8/2/2011 5:04:00 PM
Truly, a vision worth jousting for. Enjoyed this fine write. Love, daver
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:00:00 PM
Lovely poem elizabeth....I like your rhyming very much.
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem and thank you for your kind words I appreciate it---Lori
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:22:00 AM
enjoyed reading your work today....well penned!
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:07:00 AM
I love this clever piece, Elizabeth
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:34:00 PM
Dreams are what makes this world a wonderful place, they're not all bad, and they certainly add to our poems, keep up the dreaming, and writing, I'm enjoying them.
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:13:00 PM
very nice rhyming. john
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Date: 8/1/2011 7:12:00 PM
Ps. Smile, *^_^* “Yesss, Visions As Lovely As Your Beauty My Dear, Precious Elizabeth *^_^* This, I Can Most Surely Tell So, Let Your Lovely Light Shine Bright My Dear &, Thank You Again *^_^* Tis Very Kind!” === My Love As Always, Jasper *
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Date: 8/1/2011 5:16:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Would Say That This Somewhat Enchanting Verse Would Be Worthy to Counted As Regals Moment Amid Pleasantries Escapism My Dear Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! *^_^* The Only Thing Lacking After Viewing Its Creative Canvas Would Be The Bright Lights In Beautiful Eyes For Happy Hearts to Forever Hold; A Fave Amid The Royal Section of Lovely.” === My Love & Warmth to You Always, Jasper *
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:46:00 PM
Imaginative piece, nicely played out. xoxo, Robert.
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:25:00 PM
Classic expression my friend it is. Last line touched my sense what I have. 'Was nothing.....daydream's laughter'. Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.bl
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:55:00 PM
Powerful imagery, and as always a very strong close, your poetry continues to astound, beautiful poem. :)
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:44:00 PM
i'd like to linger and stay on in this dream, elizabeth, especially on a rainy night... love the mood and tenor of this courtly-laden piece..sheer delight, dear you!! wow..:) hugggs, nette
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:19:00 PM
We all are kings or queens in our daydreams. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:13:00 PM
oh elizabeth, yet another masterpiece, flows off your pen. more complicated than any butterflys wing and more beautiful, than a morning spring. love it. steven
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