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The Pursuit

Whether black or white, biding for a milky bite… ________________________________________ March 14, 2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2016 2:41:00 PM

You made me think and reread this one-liner, Probir! I came to conclude that it is more sensual than anything else! ~ Congratulations on a fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/31/2016 8:00:00 AM

Before the mind words wander/ sometime in splendour/ sometime as cold as December... the sense or meaning becomes secondary.. That you like this tiny single line is a great satisfaction for me... The win may follow... Regards...

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/30/2016 9:10:00 AM

Congratulations Probir on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/31/2016 8:02:00 AM

Hello Hans, Thanks for visiting and encouraging, as you always do,...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/29/2016 3:26:00 AM

Brilliant take Probir.. congrats on big win!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/30/2016 2:08:00 AM

Thanks Upma...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2016 12:38:00 PM

Cool image!! Congrats, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 8:16:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/27/2016 11:32:00 AM

Hi Probir, an excellent Monoku, enjoyed your take on the picture. This monoku goes into my faves. Have a good day. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Vlad...

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/27/2016 8:56:00 AM

Excellent! Congrats!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thank you...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 11:59:00 PM

Probir, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/27/2016 3:11:00 AM

Thank you so much LINDA...

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/17/2016 6:52:00 PM

Interesting take. Either sensual, or you're biting into chocolate (white or black) ... ha ha ha. You do have a different outlook, friend.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2016 11:58:00 AM

Right. Thank you Timothy...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2016 8:49:00 PM

nicely done, Probir. Good luck in the contest

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 10:03:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.......always so encouraging.....