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The Puppy

The puppy’s eyes were huge and sad. His tail a drum did beat within my head. His whimper a sound from which I could not part. His posture defeated struck upon my heart. His expectations high. His whimpers slow. Within his cage he lays submissively low. I could not walk away when invited in by eyes so bright. I reached low to scratch his ears and touch his head so light. Upon my hand he did drool, as his tongue did lick to know. Then he held me in his mouth so tight as not to let me go. A connection felt, a gentle hand, a belly rub a treat. I knew to hold him close- my heart made whole again would beat. Forever mine whispered in my ear. I could not let him go. Unconditional love to feel- I could not look away, so Our heart beat once- then twice again in unison unique. Without a doubt- one way to go- my heart does tightly seek. I know to take him home- my life would be so sweet. One dog has died. Now another found. My life continues still. New hopes and dreams- to home we go as life proclaims its’ fill. But his friend sits shivering, as we prepare to leave. My heart grows suddenly still. To look, to see, my heart to believe One is good, but two is best- two hearts my love can shield. Toward my home we turn again- three hearts to joyfully yield. Once a house- now a home we will successfully build. So if a shelter you do pass, stop a moment to see… Perhaps a loved one waits inside, if a loving home you have a need...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/20/2014 6:03:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Carol..great write..Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
This is nice, Carol, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:41:00 PM
Carol:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 7:25:00 AM
Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, carol
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Date: 12/28/2013 6:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Carol
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:48:00 AM
Hi Carol, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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Date: 6/9/2013 11:32:00 AM
Good after noon CAROL ;-) Congratulations with your wonderful poem of friendship. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 10/10/2012 4:52:00 PM
Carol, this is how we got Princess and Lady at the shelter. One was not allowed to be adopted without the other. How could we say "no"?
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:09:00 AM
Aww.. This is very sweet and deep.
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Carol. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:28:00 PM
what a tender hearted story you told here. Wow. I dont' know how you placed but it looks like you won in PD's contest? anyway, I hope you did really well and congratulations. Carol.
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:59:00 PM
great job in contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this win to you in the contest of p.d., Carol
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:06:00 AM
Dear Carol, most of my cats were found at animal shelters. I had a similar experience. Went in looking for an orange tabby, but a gray tabby grabbed my sleeve. Katy Cat lived with me for more than 20 years. It's heartwarming to know people are adopting shelter animals. What a terrific poem! Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:20:00 AM
Congrats Carol on your wonderful win for this wonderful write ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/4/2011 6:17:00 AM
congrats on this exceptional win. cory
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:01:00 PM
This is so heartfelt and purely honest.Interesting how animals can be such a need for us.Great stuff.I would have never been able to find such delicate words such as these.Lovely....Kacey
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:36:00 PM
this is so well written nice job. cory
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