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The Pup

"She's eight weeks old and weaned," the farmer said, then placed the trembling Pup within Meg’s arms. "It’s time to go and find a home away from home where she can romp and learn and grow." Her friskiness, bright eyes, and timid bark quick warmed Meg’s heart; Pup found herself a home. That night Pup looked for mother as she whined and chewed the edges of her cardboard box. The ticking clock Meg put beneath the rags replaced the sound of mother's beating heart. A little more secure, Pup fell asleep… Meg wondered if the mother missed her pup… Two weeks have passed, and all is going well. Pup's found a niche within the household walls and learned the rules; no jumping on the couch or bed. The hours she spent in wooded yard, with kitty and the spaniel from next door, have opened up her sheltered puppy-world. How well Pup has adjusted in a life away from mother's warmth and primal love. She found herself a home away from home. Meg thought this while she stroked Pup’s silky fur and waited by the phone for her dear call— Her child at school three hundred miles away, who just began her freshman year today. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Structured Forms - Iambic Verse Sketch a Fictitious Character II Sponsor: Giorgio A.V. Judged: 01/17/2015

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Date: 1/18/2015 11:14:00 PM
A heartwarming poem, Sandra. You expressed a mother's love beautifully! Congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/19/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhonda, for your nice comment and congrats. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/18/2015 1:38:00 PM
well now didn't you bounce back strong on this win,congratulations,well written
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/18/2015 7:13:00 PM
Hi Robert, thanks for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats! I appreciate your support. Sandra
Date: 1/18/2015 9:59:00 AM
I like how you ended this. Congrats to you Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/18/2015 7:14:00 PM
Hi Rob, I am glad you liked the twist in the ending. Thanks for your nice comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 1/17/2015 11:07:00 PM
A delight to the reader,congrats on the win Sandra...huggs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/18/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Kayod5. I really appreciate your nice comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/17/2015 7:52:00 PM
Sandra, well done... a wonderful win...PD
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/18/2015 7:16:00 PM
Hi Linda, thanks so much for stopping by with your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/17/2015 6:14:00 PM
Beautifully penned Sandra a delightful read - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/18/2015 7:17:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for your continued support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/2/2015 7:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work this evening. Light & Love
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/4/2015 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Debbie. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/31/2014 3:57:00 PM
This is precious and so true. A beautiful pen.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/1/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, M.L. Thanks for stopping by with your positive comment. Happy New Year. Sandra

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