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The Proud Peacock

I am the Peacock, the beautiful bride of the bird kingdom. I am in no doubt fairer than the cock, for I dwarf its pride with feathers that stand-out. I am the Peacock who desires serfdom from the bird kingdom, for I long to usurp the title of king from the strong Eagle who soars atop with its air-borne wings. Though fit as fiddle with an awesome strength, gliding the sky's length at a blistering pace, yet dreaded for a face that is void of grace. I am the Peacock; the elegantly clad. Humans would be mad to contend with me, for shame you would see if unclad they be.

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Date: 5/15/2017 6:07:00 PM
The peacock is my very favourite bird - so beautiful, so proud and confident! Love the metaphor and imagery! Well done! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 4/11/2017 3:36:00 PM
Good one Joseph; loved the contrasts. I have a question about Line 2 (Should not the bride rather read: "Bridegroom"?) shalom/Easter blessings, if u receive it.AD
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Joseph C Ogbonna
Date: 4/17/2017 3:07:00 AM
Thanks Anil. Beauty is feminine, and the Peacock happens to be perhaps the fairest of birds. That is the reason why I consider the word 'bride' to be most suitable. Thanks, and sorry for the belated reply.

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