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The Proposal

I tried not to love you but I failed miserably I tried not to kiss you but when you kissed me for the very first time; when I felt your lips gently brushing up against mine they rendered me helpless. I tried hard to hide my emotions but not a tear I cried did you not wipe from my eyes. I tried to act proud and thought I didn't need anyone that I was happy with my life that's when you got down on one knee looked me in the eyes placed a ring on my finger and soon after became the one true love of my life....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/20/2013 8:14:00 PM
Well, I like that it's short. I can't tell if this is a happy or a sad poem. I think might be why no one's really commented on it. You're just stating a fact about something that happened to you in your life. Hopefully, this was a happy one. Then again maybe I'm just looking at it too deeply which in that case means I'm a dumbass so you can forget everything I wrote before.
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Madelin Barton
Date: 6/22/2013 9:28:00 AM
You give me lots to think of Gabe when you comment on my poetry; It never happened wishful thinking sort of deal; but you caught that ...and no it's not happy it's sarcasm
Date: 2/9/2013 2:34:00 PM
Happiness eventuallyfinds us.
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