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The Proposal

Hold me here Right here. Right now I'll keep you close And kiss your brow Take my hand And don't let go I understand The things you know I'll kiss the tears That you will cry I'll calm your fears I'll make you sigh I need you now I'll stay with you I'll show you that My heart beats true Your fragilness I can not miss Your tenderness Is in your kiss You keep me sane You make me whole Your love remains Deep in my soul I'll take your love Into my life Make me yours And be my wife Rockman :-)

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Samia Ali Salama

Date: 4/10/2012 12:27:00 PM

This was beautiful Rockman! Another gem ...Samia

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/30/2011 7:36:00 PM

Enjoyed reading again. Feels good. Soup mail

Michael Hornschuch

Date: 7/21/2011 3:08:00 PM

lol, well.....you certainly got all the girls to come a' lookin' on this write.... nice work Rockman, I'm truly enjoying the time reading your works...

Patricia Tam

Date: 7/17/2011 11:02:00 AM

If this was very romantic. It is nice to know that there are still men in the world that can feel their emotions and express them. By the way I never found your e-mail but would love some good pointers. I am very new to this but find it to be a good way to let out my feelings. I will read the rest of your poems.

Laura Ann

Date: 7/14/2011 9:58:00 PM

Oh my.... hope she said YES! Great write!

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/11/2011 12:21:00 PM

love this...romantic.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 8:59:00 AM

love it,..Linda,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/10/2011 3:44:00 PM

Always interested in what you have to say about love and the variety of ways you say it! Great verse - I enjoyed.