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The Proposal

Please, just say something. Yes or no, Maybe? Your silence seems strong, Is the ring all wrong? You’re all that I am! Please don’t be mad I’m just unsure About being Secure—with you. Secure, huh? Three long years Why this, now? Sorry, I must Say no. Wow! Written for Catie's "Hex" Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 8:12:00 AM

Mike, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the sous HOME PAGE.... always & forever *LINDA

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/21/2013 6:07:00 AM

good poem congrats on being featured Shadow x smile

J.W. Earnings

Date: 9/16/2013 5:43:00 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. GREAT JOB (thumbs up). xD DWB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2010 4:15:00 PM

Interesting topic for the Diminished Hexaverse contest. Good luck in the competition. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2010 2:27:00 PM

Ouch! Hearing "no" after three long years must hurt a lot. Hope this didn't really happen to you, Mike. It's a superbly written poem in form and content. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2010 2:42:00 PM

What a good job you did, writing for this contest! Good luck :)